November 17, 2006

Renga: Cityscapes

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Pins drop into a steel cup.
The shake of a passing train.

Rainfall will end
up with a thin ice crust,
synchronizing storm drains.

Today: one more baby born
or border crossed, 300 million.

Street lights splice traffic,
Provinces of fire-blown trees
perilous paradise

Make-up kit spilled on the 3rd ave. bridge,
Minneapolis, red leaves, red lights.

Steaming custard buns
white surface, one dotted red
Mars hangs in night sky

Mother's microwaved dinner
Salty with laughing crying

Carefully prepared
in an old fashioned homestyle -
come home to old friends

Hiss of espresso monster
Conversation bubbles up

walk into the cafe,
to the back of the room
to the one face, beaming

Alphabet soups for sale, one
by one, constructing letters

Plate stained purple,
typewriter minus letter H,
free with any purchase.

Jackhammer shredding sidewalk
Farmer's market crushed berries

Migrant workers camp by
the millennial library:
the wait, the weight

Fishboats at the marina,
City of water and ash

The line snakes over
Boat rail, turbulent water
Dead fish on the pier.

Imprints of hands on windows
just before shattering

Each to a word, lines
traced in wartime letters
maps to our past

Still--we're under the spell of
the alphabet of retaliation

Wings rise east
misguided by burning treelines,
charred city -- a speck, a speck

Yellow bulldozer snorting
launches a swirl of seagulls.

Plastic covers sag with rain,
cranes halt above
the future hospital

Ideas of her self lurking
underneath overpasses

Leaf in clover leaf
Cartoon school bus wiggles by
Scattering the wind

She sketches loops and spirals
Pencil resting against her thumb

Labyrinth turnpikes
On the daily commute-
Tolls along the way

Speedbumps glazed with yellow paint
Sleeping roadway log lizards

Filmy fog distances blue
Structures, milks signals
From the tips of antennae

Peering down on the plaza
Speckled with light and foot traffic

Beveled histories
Facades of pilaster, plinths
Speak, La Place Vendome

Interpret the messages
The speech of cogs and branches

The coming of storm?
Trees in the margin
Italicized by the wind

From the bus window, the miles
Float under well-traveled wheels

Poised in the center,
Flung to the edge of the
Roundabout turning

Towers in the east are there
So she knows she is here

Saigon: motorbikes
Jammed at stoplights, exhaust fumes
Scattering insects

Round Renga Round

The introduction to the book Round Renga Round:

http://www.ahapoetry.com/zabegan.htm

An interesting read about how a book about rengas began.

What is Renga?

"Renga was a form of collaborative poetry, usually written by three or more poets, that was created by giving the tanka, the five-line poem of the classical anthologies, a sort of call-and-response form. One poet wrote a first verse of three lines in a five syllable-seven syllable-five syllable pattern [called a HOKKU], and the second poet completed the tanka with two seven-syllable lines...

A third poet writes another three lines, which, together with the previous couplet, make an entirely new poem. Then the next poet adds another couplet to make a third poem, which is completely independent of the first two. And so on. The seasons change, the subject changes, and, in the classical renga, the poem proceeds through a hundred verses.

Rules developed. The renga had to be written in a certain way. No story could be developed, the seasons had to keep changing, a traditional image of the autumn moon had to be introduced at least twice, images of spring flowers three times, and so on. The form became immensely popular among educated people at court and in the monasteries. Treatises were written on appropriate ways of making links, and anthologies of examples were published... And it began to spread, as a social activity, to cities and towns, and was taken up by merchants and farmers, some of whom were imitating the refinements of the court, some of whom were drawn to it from the learned traditions of the monastery.

These renga often used a more informal language, treated their subjects playfully, and were shorter, often thirty-six verses long. The 36-verse form was called a KASEN, and the style of the poetry was called HAIKAI NO RENGA."

Text taken from The Essential Haiku: Versions of Basho, Buson, & Issa. Edited by Robert Hass. (c) 1994, Ecco Press.

Moving: nothing but HAT's

I've meandered over to this newer blog, and am feeling a bit bereft leaving my old postings on the other site. But of course, thanks to the ingenuity of the cyber world in which we now exist, everything I've shared on the old blog still exists at www.hoanganhtran.blogspot.com

There is, somehow, a greater sense of loss in this transition. The movement from old to new didn't result from the arrival of newer, more well-thought out ideas. Instead, it's because of a (selfish?) desire for gimicky gadgets. Blogger says it is to be standards-compliant. But it's not, really. Could this substitution originate from a desire to be decked out in fresh new attire -- laid out on display...?

Blogs are created for the personal needs of the writer, the individual wishing to make her mark on the world, vying for some attention in cyber space. Blogs are also created with the audience in mind. Who am I writing for? Who sees this page? Why do I do this? Does it matter whether or not anyone views my blog? Does it matter whether or not anyone makes a comment? Why do I care? Why suddenly this concern about what the blog looks like, about who sees it, etc.? Ultimately, it comes down to me, me, me, me -- there's not enough room here... I am a product of my environment? Yikes!

Genesis

It was the sixth day. Adam was ready.
He saw the oaks firmly rooted
in the void. Power is a matter of branching.
He had seen the mountains, vast storerooms holding
only themselves, high empty cellars.
And deer. With legs as thin as stethoscopes
they stood listening to the breast of the earth,
and as soon as they heard something, they ran away,
inventing pizzicato as they fled the horizon.
And he had seen the sea, the busy swelling and receding
that makes one calm. And the empty, provocative gestures
of the wind, come along, come along, though no one followed.
And the depths, gulfs that make one uneasy. And being silent,
because that's what everything was doing, and being too big.
Then God said: and now you. No, said Adam.


By Herman de Coninck, trans. by Laure-Anne Bosselaar and Kurt Brown
The Plural of Happiness: Selected Poems of Herman de Coninck, Oberlin College Press

Read this poem on Poetry Daily